Medicine

1. you need to read the “Jin Gui Yao Lue” the sections about this formula, put the lines that description this formula and explain it’s original indication and applications, explain the function and dosage of formula, original application of formula. Why it can treat dysmenorrhea from TCM point of view.

2. You need to give clearly your conclusion under each title / heading, such as background of study, purpose of study, Differences between Primary Dysmenorrhea and Secondary Dysmenorrhea. As I understand, you should not focus solely on siting other author’s research references here without your own ideas

3. Some inside content doesn’t match the heading.

The last letter has this suggestion

The attachment has a professor’s question.

The last modified version you gave me

In the end, I didn’t know how to propose so many questions to the school

Can you tell me how to deal with the current situation?

keaneku liu
00:24 (15 hours ago)
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After our discussion last week, there are still some issues that require revision in order to improve your paper. I would first suggest reorganizing the structure of your paper to improve clarity and coherence. In addition, there needs to be more analysis of the sources that you’ve gathered. Most importantly, you are also lacking some sources for review.

I’ve collected and attached some articles that were published in TCM magazines in China. I think they would add interesting and relevant evidence to your paper. Feel free to use these sources or find different ones, but just make sure to summarize them and provide strong analysis. The first article is actually someone’s master graduate thesis. The title is:”Clinical research on efficacy of DSS for patients with primary dysmenorrhea”.
加减当归芍药散治疗肝郁脾虚型痛经的临床研究.pdf

Your paper doesn’t need to have clinical observations with patients, but the rest should be the same.

I would suggest you organize your paper with the following content:

Chapter one: Literature Research (Introduction)
1. The understanding of primary dysmenorrhea in TCM
2. The understanding of primary dysmenorrhea in biomedicine
3. The clinical review of primary dysmenorrhea in TCM ( data review that include all kinds of treatment modality )

Chapter two: Clinica study on Dang Gui Shao Yao San for primary dysmenorrhea
1. The original source of DSS( original discuss in JIngui)
2. The clinical application of DSS in gynecological conditions( data review)
3. The clinical application of DSS for primary dysmenorrhea( data review)

Chapter tree: Method and data analysis ( I think you might have some misunderstood about methodology with literature review. Today consulted with a statistics expert in the medical research field. She said it should use “Meta-analysis”)

Chapter four Result

Chapter five: Discuss and analysis
1. TCM theory base of DSS on primary dysmenorrhea
(1). TCM theory on relation of liver and menses
(2). TCM theory on relation of spleen and menses
(3). The relation of disharmony of liver and spleen with menstrual pain
(4). Harmonizing liver and spleen is an important treatment for primary dysmenorrhea

2. TCM mechanism of DSS for Primary dysmenorrhea
(1). The composition of herbal ingredients and dosage
(2). The functional analysis of the formula
(3). The efficacy and safety analysis
(4). Problems and prospects

Conclusion